Sunday, April 4, 2010

Reveal

Neither once nor twice
I think it's infinite times
It reaches as a gush of air
Knocking my heart and soul.
It hides somewhere in a part of brain,
Leaving me in a forlorn way.
Making efforts to come out,
And never met this thought again;
But every time while unloading my mind,
It lurks and appears in front of my eye.
Today it flashes again in my mind
With sudden happiness and pain
It shuddered me in tears,
Leaving me in a forlorn way.
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6 comments:

  1. Datta AnkusheApril 6, 2010 at 10:49 PM

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  2. Datta AnkusheApril 6, 2010 at 10:55 PM

    I think, these lines express how unexpressed feelings and thoughts of past life experience raise upheaval into our mind if we don't understand them. You invoke serious thinking into the reader's mind, Priyanka.

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  3. vikasApril 8, 2010 at 11:42 AM

    but what???
    the title is reaveal, but you didn't reveal it eventually..

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  4. Priyanka SinghApril 8, 2010 at 11:59 PM

    its incomplete... wait it will reveal soon

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  5. UnknownApril 9, 2010 at 1:04 AM

    Powerful! I am in a trance!! It will reveal soon? So, we can now expect more regular unloading of your brain? hehehe

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  6. MonaApril 14, 2010 at 10:44 AM

    Every-time when it appears in front of my eyes
    It lefts me with lot of pain
    The pain of being away from family
    The pain of being cheated
    The pain of being not able to share

    But it is always followed by another thought
    which lefts me with smile and happiness
    The happiness of being loved
    The happiness of being in the hearts of loved ones
    The happiness of being satisfied

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