Wednesday, June 22, 2011

Early Morning Sleep

Cool weather, warm bed, clock stuck five;
No bad dreams and worries dwelling on unconscious mind.
Curtain drifting over the face; Wind coming from the windowpane.
Suddenly the alarm rang; it’s time to rise again.
Oh! The bitter sound and an indolent move to turn off the alarm.

Sleepy-eyed and dropping eyelids, a lethargic step putting down the bed;
Reached the sofa and pillowing again.
Experienced pleasant, comfort cushion and logs Z’s once again.
Its doorbell turn now and my sleep disappeared;
Finally awaken, leaving the sweet early morning sleep.

3 comments:

  1. Your writing shows that you have good skill to present the real life in pictorial way.

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  2. Thanks and that what we call onomatopoeia effect ...the effect of enhancing the reader or listener's imagination.

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  3. this is nice one..............I feel the same...........oh my god morning sleep is so precious..

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